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Showing posts with label 2019. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 2019. Show all posts
Tuesday, 26 November 2019
Monday, 25 November 2019
ePortfolio Writing 2019
Report Writing
Achievement Objectives Level 3 & 4
Integrate sources of information, processes, and strategies with developing confidence to identify, form, and express ideas.
Show a developing understanding of how texts are shaped for different purposes and audiences.
Show a developing understanding of ideas within, across, and beyond texts.
Show a developing understanding of how language features are used for effect within and across texts.
Show a developing understanding of text structures.
Show an increasing understanding of ideas within, across, and beyond texts.
Integrate sources of information, processes, and strategies confidently to identify, form, and express ideas.
Show an increasing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
Select, develop, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
Use a range of language features appropriately, showing an increasing understanding of their effects.
Insert a picture of your draft report here
Publish your writing here
The tyrannosaurus rex is definitely one of the most iconic and well recognized dinosaur's in history
(also tyrannosaurus rex means tyrant lizard king in latin) the tyrannosaurus rex a.k.a.the t rex certainly is iconic
but when you think of a t rex in your head you probably imagine a forty foot upstanding lizard with brown skin
but it's been speculated that there were around fifty variations of it caused from them all going to different climates
places eating different food doing different things the average t rex lived in north america but one of the variations was
the tarbosaurus which came from asia and was a little bit smaller
(also tyrannosaurus rex means tyrant lizard king in latin) the tyrannosaurus rex a.k.a.the t rex certainly is iconic
but when you think of a t rex in your head you probably imagine a forty foot upstanding lizard with brown skin
but it's been speculated that there were around fifty variations of it caused from them all going to different climates
places eating different food doing different things the average t rex lived in north america but one of the variations was
the tarbosaurus which came from asia and was a little bit smaller
Self Reflection:
medal: it was very descriptive
medal: it was pretty long
back pack: being more to the point
medal: it was very descriptive
medal: it was pretty long
back pack: being more to the point
Labels:
2019,
ePortfolio,
Miss Turner,
Term 4,
Writing
Monday, 11 November 2019
traditional gathering and harvesting kai
maori foods were very simple eating stuff like fish vegtables and meat the kumara which is one of the more popular foods was thought to be a subspecies of potato's it but unlike potato's there were
over 500 different types of kumara here is a picture of some
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another thing they loved to eat was fish mostly flounder which they caught with spears and cray fish they caught with nets but they usually ate them raw but still would have been healthy heres a picture of a flounder

over 500 different types of kumara here is a picture of some
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another thing they loved to eat was fish mostly flounder which they caught with spears and cray fish they caught with nets but they usually ate them raw but still would have been healthy heres a picture of a flounder

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2019,
Maori,
Miss Turner,
Term 4
Sunday, 10 November 2019
E-portfolio knowledge sample 2019
My goal is to do it faster and learn them better
Medal: i did it in time
Medal: i got all the questions right
Backpack: i need to do it faster
Labels:
2019,
E-Portfolio,
Maths,
Miss Turner,
Term 4
Wednesday, 30 October 2019
Wednesday, 25 September 2019
Tuesday, 24 September 2019
Monday, 16 September 2019
Wednesday, 11 September 2019
Sunday, 25 August 2019
E-portfolio Strategy
find fraction of whole numbers e.g 3/4 of 24= .3/4 of ? =21

1. 3 of 24 =6 x 3=18
4 1. i did it really fast 2. i did it twice to see if i was right
3.making sure i all ways get it right
2. 2 0f 30 =10 x 2 =20
3
3. 5 of 24 = 4 x 5 = 20
6
4. 3 of 28 = 7 x 3 = 21
4
5. 4 of 25 = 5 x 4 = 20
5

1. 3 of 24 =6 x 3=18
4 1. i did it really fast 2. i did it twice to see if i was right
3.making sure i all ways get it right
2. 2 0f 30 =10 x 2 =20
3
3. 5 of 24 = 4 x 5 = 20
6
4. 3 of 28 = 7 x 3 = 21
4
5. 4 of 25 = 5 x 4 = 20
5
Labels:
2019,
Maths,
Miss Turner,
Term 3
Tuesday, 13 August 2019
Wednesday, 31 July 2019
Wednesday, 3 July 2019
Sunday, 19 May 2019
E-portfolio-knowledge sample
Order decimals to 3 decimal places e.g 0.379 0.48 0.8
Medal: I did it which is a positive
Medal: I did it mostly on time
Backpack: I need to focus more
Labels:
2019,
home class miss Hurley,
Maths,
Term 2
Wednesday, 10 April 2019
Thursday, 28 March 2019
E-Portfolio Writing: Camp
Describe It - Camp Experiences
Learning Objectives:
Level 3
- Select, form, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
- Use language features appropriately, showing a developing understanding of their effects.
- Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.
- Show a developing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
Level 4.
- Select, develop, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
- Use a range of language features appropriately, showing an increasing understanding of their effects.
- Organise texts. Using a range of appropriate structures.
- Show an increasing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
Learning goals:
- To ‘Show, Don’t Tell’ the reader by painting a picture with words.
- A variety of sentence starters
- A variety of sentence lengths
- Edit and rework
- Effective peer checking and feedback
The appearance of it was terrifying. Fear slowly covered me, but still I had an urge to do it hearing countless screams as my turn was coming fourth every time. I heard that belt unclicking and people screaming it would send shivers down my spine and scare me just that little bit more but still wanted to do it just so I could say I've done it. The rope always seemed to get tighter with every run, it was finally my turn the supervisor buckle me up into the giant swing as it lifted me up into the air it started to get harder to breathe. I was going to tell them to let me down but I just didn’t, finally it stopped pulling me up the instructor yelled “Are you okay?”
“I’m okay” I yelled back. The belt unclicked and it dropped down a little bit which made myself twitch before I knew it I was flying through the air it was awesome after it stopped the instructor asked if i wanted to have another go? And I did it was even better than the first time.But after that I had to hop off but at least I got to do it and also it helped with my fear of heights.
Student Reflection:
In my writing one of my goals is to support main ideas
I did show this goal in my writing because I had good detail.
In my writing one of my goals is to check for spelling and punctuation mistakes.
I did not show this goal in my writing because I tried to remember some punctuation rules but I didn't always do it.
My next step is to use capital letters and punctuation correctly.
Teacher Comment:
Edge, I like the way you've used quotation marks correctly in this piece of writing. You have recounted your experience and I can imagine how you were feeling! Watch out for repeating words. Part of the editing process means checking for this and seeing where you can change certain words, phrases or sentences to create impact. |
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2019,
E-Portfolio,
Miss Turner,
Term 1,
Writing
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